Positive Lyrics Review

[isaiasbaquedano1501]

Hello everyone.. This is my first post ever on the forum! I wanted your guy's thoughts to see if my idea on lyrics fits the Positive Song Submission.. (Y190530PM)

"Positive lyric themes are what they're looking for! Please steer clear of lyrics that are sad or melancholy or even too personal. Universal lyrics that avoid references to specific names, dates, times, places, and profanity are recommended."

I'm questioning my lyrics to see if it fits the description so I came here to get any advice. These are my lyrics for the song that I planned on submitting.


" I woke up this morning with this feeling that keeps growing
Its indescribable
A bright light within inside
I see the world around me with many dark clouds still surrounding
Trying to fade me out
But I stand tall with a smile

Oh this is who we're meant to be

Shine brighter than the stars
This is who you are
A guiding light in paradise
Run through every night you sleep
Let's wake up to our dreams
A lovely world that's shining bright

I take a step and look behind and see that I am closer
Than I was before
What's gone is gone now give me more
Through stormy nights my light still shines when I keep my eyes all on the prize
And I stay in sight
I'm standing tall I'm standing bright

Oh this is who we're meant to be

Shine brighter than the stars
This is who you are
A guiding light in paradise
Run through every night you sleep
Let's wake up to our dreams
A lovely world that's shining bright "

This is my song and I was wondering if the lyrics might not fit what they're asking for. Any advice will help me! Thank you so much in advance!!