Epic Escape FINALmix (Sitar & Harp added)

[k o star]

FINAL:Just done mixing this one... time to wrap it up & send it in, abt few hours time...I'm not sure if I over squashed the mix??? as I wanted this one loud...I know Everyone is busy with submissions & work & Family...So I do really Appreciate if anyone can have a final check & feedbackIf U ve any time to spare, only if possible... Big Thank U in advance =)©2009, K.O. StaR (Kelvin Tan B.H.) -APRA-ESCAPE (Hybrid Orchestra) composed, performed, recorded & produced by Kelvin Tan B.H.Registered & Protected MCN:C2452-CF7DD-E60F0ESCAPE FINAL:http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... rueorTrack 2 on:www.taxi.comRegards,KelThe Very NOW:Polished & 92.333 % done...Phew... these Orchestra pieces are pretty tough to mix huh!Thanks for all the Awesome feedback...-KelI just completely removed the melody lines & rewrote everything...so I really don't know if I destroyed this song completely or made it better... and I only got 1 day left to repair it before the listing due date... hmmm,Really need some feedback on this... if U can?Especially on the melody lines, cos that's what I changed..ESCAPE Modified:http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... trueESCAPE Previous version:http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... rueorTrack 2 and 3 on:www.taxi.com-KelFINAL NOW:Just recorded Sitar parts with my Variax 300 Ax...Exhausted...Escape:http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... rueorTrack 2 on:www.taxi.comCheers,-KelPRESENT:Added melody lines & cleaned up the muddy drumparts as suggested... More feedback most welcometh-KPAST:Motivated by Orest's advice, I took a loan & got EWQLSO then got working on this track & created it in 2.5 hours. Hence, it's still in very rough form...Definitely easier to mix these Orchestral sounds as opposed to the cheaper softwares. Thanks Alexander... cool advice!Escape:http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... rueorTrack 1 on:www.taxi.comAll feedback welcomethWill be back in abt 8 hours to check out other's works...Peace,Kel

[wignelson]

This is a good action/adventure piece, but the distortion of the percussion is a distraction for me. It sounds like something tearing on my system. I would clean up that sound of the distorted guitar and replace with pizz contrabass or something similar. Even tuba for the bottom.Wig