My Lobotomy Baby

[wignelson]

Here is a rock song that I might submit. Any thoughts?hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplaye ... q=hiThanks to Tony Sams for the lead guitar breaks.

[rld]

Boy...this sounds really disjointed to me.Hard time following whats going on in the intro...I think its mostly the drums...seems like lots of missed punches and tags which give the whole thing an unfocused feel.

[geo]

Hey Wig....I think this is going to need some work before submission.... To be honest I don't think this fits your style... the drums need work... the feel needs to change sectionally more.... the cymbals are a little hot... and some of the instrumentation is not reflective of the genre....I would go for a stripped down bass, drums and that guitar... maybe some keys... Blues/Rock thingy...Good luck!!Peace, Geo

[cameron]

Hey Wig,I think it's cool that you're trying new stuff, but I have to agree that this sounds a bit disjointed. There's just too much going on in the background throughout, lots of guitar licks and something that sounds to my ears like a glass cowbell. I'd simplify it and give it more of a groove, and save the busy stuff for just the last chorus or outro. I like your voice though and think this could be a cool a/c song if you can nail the style down production wise.Cam