Same Shirt Different Day (added Taxi critique)

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Sept 28, 2008, 1:43pm, billg wrote:Hey Cam, I didn't really think there was a big problem going back to the line, just that the perfect twist (using the shirt/day thing) would knock this out of the park. Unfortunately it's easier said than done . . . if I had the perfect line I'd gladly give it to you (in exchange for a virtual beer of course!).I think I know what Bill meant.... on the final chorus go...Same shirt, different dayone of these times I'm going to run awayI'm gonna head to the Florida Keys to stayGet a different shirt, for a better dayA different shirt, for a better dayEverybody!!A different shirt, for a better dayMight work... especially with the Buffet feel...Peace, Geo