Me rapping (WORKS NOW!) :)

[daniel481]

...Rap/Hip Hop. Thought I'd try something for this listing:MTV-like URBAN/RAP/HIP HOP SONGS (w/ vocals) along the lines of Chamillionaire, 50 Cent, Twista, T.I., Mary J. Blige, Fabolous, Young Jeezy, Queen Latifah, R. Kelly, etc. are sought by the Music Coordinator of a Cable TV Network for numerous shows she's working on. No lyrical theme restrictions, but no profanity -- clean versions only. No need to submit instrumentals, but if the music coord. is interested in licensing your song, she may ask for an instrumental version, so having one on hand is recommended. Great performances are essential. No uncleared samples. If forwarded for S070522UR, no need to submit the same material. Broadcast quality needed [great sounding home recordings are OK]. All submissions will be screened on a YES/NO BASIS ONLY -- NO CRITIQUES FROM TAXI. For ground submissions, please enclose a S.A.S.E. if you would like a response. Submissions must be received no later than Nov. 29, 2007.TAXI # Y071129URIt's still in progress and it's not a finished, and like I said, it's my first "rap"...but just curious to get a little bit of feedback!"Darkhouse"http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... eam=trueSo go ahead, tear me apart, I'm ready for it Dan

[daniel481]

For some reason the link doesn't seem to be working, so if anyone wouldn't mind going to my page at taxi.com/dandiaz and checking out "DarkHouse", I'd appreciate it!

[daniel481]

Not even good enough for a single comment, huh!

[geo]

Hey Dan, went to said site, no "Darkhorse" in sight (or site), too bad, I was hoping it was worst than my attempt at rap which I don't have the guts to post ... Geo

[daniel481]

Really...weird. It's "DarkHouse", but I still don't know why the link doesn't work...Well thanks for trying!Dan

[geo]

Just checked again, link no bueno, no "Darkhouse " either, will check back later amigo... Geo

[daniel481]

Very strange. I just tried to re-upload it and it won't let me, so there must be something up with the site.I'll try again later!

[daniel481]

Should work now, here's the real link: http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... =trueSorry for the inconvenience please let me know what you think!Dan

[geo]

Dude, I'm no rap expert but that's pretty tight, you may have found your niche!! Much better than my attempt! I would give this a sub, hey, you never know, good work... Geo

[daniel481]

Thanks! I'm not so sure if it's my niche, but I might go ahead and send it in for that listing I'm glad you liked it though!Dan