Is this song a HIT?

[deantaylor]

Casey, thanks. I understand your idea. Right now we like the style as it is (smooth, subtle), but ... I'd love to hear your version, too. It could be very cool that way. And I know what you mean about film/tv. Good to hear dated is not 'dated' there. lolMartin, thanks for taking the time! Your opinions are appreciated. It is sometimes hard to judge one's own songs, so thanks for helping us get some perspective on it. btw: My philosophy on songwriting and 'hits' is very similar to yours.Dean

[billg]

Hey Dean, while I agree with the others I think that if a female vocalist was singing this (track as is w/ vocals an octave higher) you'd see a huge improvement. -billg-

[deantaylor]

Bill, thanks for taking the time to give us some feedback. Dean