Can you guys give me some feeback

[rtucker]

What do you think of this song everyone? It's called Jason Michael...http://www.broadjam.com/transmit/transm ... sq=1Robbie

[emusic]

Very sketchy sound. The melodies is ok, but the total change at 00:40 breaks away as a totally new song (for me). I also miss some structure of it all. ANd here came that change again (chorus?). That mood change totally messes it up for me.The good thing to say is part of the melodies is ok.Get some more structure and production into it, and glue that chorus in so it makes more sense. Allthough I don´t think this tune will pass ordinary in my ears, even with those bits fit in.No offence.

[rtucker]

That's awesome, that is what I actually wanted to hear. I am trying to start a different style of music, that is more of an adventure than a quest for cash. But cool, thanks for the review, I am excited to see what kind of a critic I get back for it from taxi.Robbie

[emusic]

Kudos for trying to think along new lines, but the song need to be more "hooky" imo.

[apjc10]

I would have to agree. The song is all over the place and even when is settled in it is still just okay. I mean no disrespect...sometimes it just doesn't work.

[frequency]

i like it... not the same old same old. nice originality

[rtucker]

thanks. I really dig it

[billg]

Well, if you were going for something different . . . mission accomplished! I'm not sure what to think of your tune but I'll take some of what your smokin'! -billg-

[bobbydazzler]

mmmm... part of me really likes the complete left field approach... although when you think about it alot of songs have real contrast... Sgt Peppers, Bohemian rhap, alot of Arctic Monkeys... in this song in particular each part sounds like they could be good songs in their own right... however I am a big fan of doing what ever you feel like the song wants... formulaic music might make money but it can be pretty boring too.. and as you say money ain't the reason being the song.. good on ya mate..

[rtucker]

thanks once again.