Re: You Gave Me Goodbye

hummingbird · Post by **hummingbird** » Tue May 15, 2007 6:29 pm

Quote:This song is longer than 30 seconds. Originally it was an instrumental, but it conjured up ideas for a sad story line that I turned into some lyrics.You Gave Me GoodbyeWow, very beautiful song. Lovely vocals. My only crit is the chorus needs to come in at the end of the first verse. Great production. I like it a lot.

stickinsound · Post by **stickinsound** » Wed May 23, 2007 8:00 am

when i heard the first (full) version , i was thinking this would be an awesome acoustic tune , and "bang" there it was . you r an incredible writer and musician , this song is amazing, dont change a thing , it will go , just be patient. good luck , not that youll need it.