Play Me A Country Song

[irwin]

Hi everyone,Please be kind and give me a feedback on this song.Below is the link: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... 495672Play Me A Country Song©2005 Irwin Byron Abrigo(verse 1) Had a date the other night with a girl I just met at a tub down at the country sidethey were a few couples out on the dance floor dancing to music I’d never really like (Chorus 1) They didn’t play a country songI’d wanted to hear a country songIf they would they would have brought the place downI wish they’d played a country song(verse 2) I stood there with my date staring each other in the faceI didn’t know her dos or donts for a dance I lead the way and I talk to the DJI said play me a country song(Chorus 2) I wanna to hear a country songplease play me a country songIf you do you’ll bring the house downwouldn’d you Play me a country song(verse 3) We left a little after midnight and still they didn’t play a country songI slept with it on my mind the next morning I turn on the radio they were playing a country song(Chorus 3)And they were playing a country song (country song)and I can hear it all day long (country song)playing a country song (country song)oh oh a country song(verse 4) My date dropped in at me home later on that evening I open up the door and I wasn’t believing she talk about the other night she said she really had a good timethen came a silent she broke down and cry(Chorus 4) They didn’t play a country songshe’d wanted to hear a country songwould have brought the whole place down (whole place down)if they had played a country songPlay A country song (country song)I wanna hear a country song (country song)all day all night long (country song)play me a country songplay me a country song (play me a country song)would you play me a country song (play me a country song)all day all night long (play me a country song)play me a country songIrwin Byron Abrigo songwriter

[horacejesse]

The link you provided does not take me to this song.As pure lyrics, though, the piece has big problems IMO, I am sorry to say. The phrase "country song" is repeated about 26 times. Half that many is way too much. It sounds like the speaker is a drunk who keeps repeating himself. Nothing comes of the whole song except the speaker wants to hear a country song and did not get to.Other country songs have gotten reviews like this on here and gone on to do good things, so this is just one man's opinion. My opinion is your song does not need a tuneup or even a valve job. The entire engine needs to be rebuilt from scratch.

[irwin]

Hi horacejesse,The problems as been fix. You can now listen to my song with The link provided, it will take to the song.Thanks so much for your opinion on the lyrics.IrwinSongwriter

[horacejesse]

It might get a forward!