New here.would like some feedback on some songs...

[gunner]

Hey Everyone,Well,,,I need some constructive criticism on some songs of mine, they are all guitar,and drum loops, no vocals yet anyway,,,I have said goodbye to the band thing, after 20 years and nothing has happened, so i am doing home recordings now,,,so, just learning Acid Pro,,,,any feedback would be appreciated and yes they are unfinished,,,but i hope someone out there enjoys them,,,the link is....... www.unsignedbandweb.com/larry_gunnI look forward to meeting everyone here at TAXI,Gunner

[superflux]

No question that you've got a command ofthe instrument.

[gunner]

Quote:No question that you've got a command ofthe instrument. Wow, thanks, i really do appreciate it......Gunner

[rexman22583]

your pretty good man! I could use a guitarist like you in my band!!!!!

[gunner]

well,,,are you anywhere near detroit????if so..im up for it....if not...oh well....lolbut thanks for the compliment!!

[staggerlee]

Add more variety, in terms of chord progressions, etc. The music is interesting, but gets too monotonous because there really is no change.

[serge]

"Sliced" needs a vocals lines for sure. "Blues in E" is good by itself. Electronic style song is a fun. My advice is to put a rock solo guitar over it. It might be interesting !Serge

[gunner]

Staggerlee...thanks for the advice i am working on finishing these songs...these were just unfinished pieces postedto get an idea of what people may/may not like about them,,,,but i appreciate your input..Private Beat...thanks to you as well...i never thought of putting a guitar solo behind that one song "Mankind"appreciate it...i am going to attempt that today!!and to all the rest of you who have posted here...thank you for your input....it is always appreciated!!!GunnerI have more music up at www.indieviews.com/indieviews/gunner

[rockmann]

Gunner,Just had a chance to listen to some of the stuff you originally posted. Nice chops, man. Great guitar tone. You've got a lot of talent that you can put to good use. You may want to try finding someone to collaborate with. Even over the Internet. That's what we do in Project-43. Charlie and I pass back and forth wav files of our part and mix them ourselves using multi-track software. It's fun and great way to continue evolving. And who knows where it will end up!

[brokamp]

I agree with Rockermann. Solid chops. I'd like to hear some of your ideas bounced off of some the other talented musicians hanging around here.