"With All My Love" - please critique!

[oxe57]

"With All My Love" dear babyit's time for me to leavethough you feel i'm wastin' my timethe songs that I singwill someday bring mefortune and fameI wish you felt the samewith all my lovei'm 'gonna miss youwith all my lovei'll never forget youas I wipe these tears from my eyesit's hard to say goodbyewith all my loveangelthese words I write seem so wrongI don't share your point of viewthe blue collar wayis all you craveforty hours a weekthat's not the life for me(repeat chorus)who's to say i'm rightwho's to say you're wrongwe can't agreeit's time I moved on(repeat chorus)(coda)copyright 2006 richard c. evans

[countrysongwriter1]

Howdy,I think these are GREAT lyrics>