SE-CUR-I-TY

[irwin]

Hi everyone, this is a song that I would like you to give your veiw on.SE-CUR-I-TY © By: Irwin Bryon Abrigo(No 1.) looking here looking there checking top and bottom In the bags suitcases your pocket skirts and pants Rubbing my hand through your hair Look into your eyes and don’t you even dareask me why or I’ll say (No 2.) It’s my job I’m a security man Security (is my job) SE-CUR-I-TY (No 3.) Since that day September Eleven year two thousand and one I’ve been being on de alarm Walking the streets without fearlook into your faceand don’t you even dare ask me To explain or I’ll say. (Repeat( No 2.)Repeat((No3)©Irwin Byron AbrigoAll rights reservedwww.soundclick.com/Irwindemo

[Casey H]

Quote:SE-CUR-I-TY © By: Irwin Bryon Abrigo(No 1.) looking here looking there checking top and bottom In the bags suitcases your pocket skirts and pants Rubbing my hand through your hair Look into your eyes and don’t you even dearask me why or I’ll say (No 2.) It’s my job I’m a security man Security (is my job) SE-CUR-I-TY (No 3.) Since that day September Eleven year two thousand and one I’ve been being on de alarm Walking the streets without fearlook into your faceand don’t you even dear ask me To explain or I’ll say. (Repeat( No 2.)Repeat((No3)©Irwin Byron AbrigoAll rights reservedwww.soundclick.com/IrwindemoHi Irwin I'm having trouble reading a consistent story here. It seems mixed between this being about security in a love relationship (hands through the hair, etc) and being about a real security guard (Sept 11, etc). Was it your intention to use an analogy here? (i.e. like James Taylor's "Handyman")Also, there are a few typos:In the bags suitcases your pocket skirts and pants I can't figure out what the above is saying.and don’t you even dear I assume you meant "dare" here.You have some good ideas. I just think they need to be better focused... Regards Casey

[irwin]

Hi Hurowitz,I understand your point about my song lyrics. Thanks for the comments!Irwin Abrigosongwriterwww.soundclick.com/Irwindemo