CAUGHT IN BETWEEN (review please)

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CAUGHT IN BETWEEN (review please)

Post by shutts » Wed Mar 08, 2006 7:03 am

CAUGHT DEEP INSIDE WHERE THERES NO PLACE TO HIDESURROUNDING THE SIZE OF THE WORLD AT OUR SIDETHROUGH ALL THE ANGER AND SELFISHNESS PRIDEEMPTY INSIDE WITH NOTHING ON THE MIND(pre chorus)LOST IN BETWEEN THE ONES WHO KNEW YOU BEFORENOWHERE TO RUNNOWHERE TO HIDELOST IN SOMETHING NO ONE KNOWSNOWHERE TO GO NOWHERE TO GOTHEY WILL FIND YOU…(chorus)YOU CANT HIDE FROM THE TRUTH ANYMORESO TAKE ADVANTAGE THIS MAY NEVER COME AGAINTHE TRUTH INSIDE WILL HURTBUT THE PAIN WE SUFFER IS WHAT KEEPS US GOINGYOU CAN HIDE FROM YOURSELF IF YOU REALLY WANT TOBUT ILL TELL YOU NOW ONLY REGRETS WILL HAUNT YOU(verse2)CAUGHT DEEP INSIDE WHERE THERE’S NO ONE AROUNDFALLING FARTHER TILL YOU HIT THE GROUNDTHROUGH ALL OF THE PRESSURE THAT FILLS YOUR MOUNDTAKE ONE TAKE TWO TAKE IN ALL THE SOUNDS(pre chorus)LOST IN BETWEEN THE ONES WHO KNEW YOU BEFORENOWHERE TO RUNNOWHERE TO HIDELOST IN SOMETHING NO ONE KNOWSNOWHERE TO GO NOWHERE TO GOTHEY WILL FIND YOU…(chorus)YOU CANT HIDE FROM THE TRUTH ANYMORESO TAKE ADVANTAGE THIS MAY NEVER COME AGAINTHE TRUTH INSIDE WILL HURTBUT THE PAIN WE SUFFER IS WHAT KEEPS US GOINGYOU CAN HIDE FROM YOURSELF IF YOU REALLY WANT TOBUT ILL TELL YOU NOW YOU’LL NEVER BE WHO YOU WANT TO BE(bridge)CAUGHT IN BETWEEN THE ONES WHO HATE YOU THE ONES WHO LOVE YOUCAUGHT IN BETWEEN THE WORLD AROUND YOU THE WORLD THAT CONSUMES YOUCopyright SOLACED 2006

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Re: CAUGHT INBETWEEN (review this)

Post by johnnydean1 » Wed Mar 08, 2006 9:33 am

It will be an absolute honor to review this,I am extremely humbled that you should allow such mere mortals as the taxi crew to gaze upon this work of sheer brilliance I have never before and will never again see anything of such amazing..............................................words fail me,forgive me oh great one I am not worthy.Right,here goes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yes it's coming through it's ..............................................................BLUE.BTW Had you said please I would have gone into even more detail.

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Re: CAUGHT IN BETWEEN (review please)

Post by Casey H » Wed Mar 08, 2006 9:46 am

It reminds me a lot of "Don't it Make My Brown Eyes Blue" by Crystal Gayle.. Casey

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Re: CAUGHT IN BETWEEN (review please)

Post by johnnydean1 » Wed Mar 08, 2006 9:51 am

Quote:It reminds me a lot of "Don't it Make My Brown Eyes Blue" by Crystal Gayle.. CaseyNo Casey,It's more Blue by Leanne Rhimes.

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Re: CAUGHT IN BETWEEN (review please)

Post by shutts » Wed Mar 08, 2006 10:03 am

WELL THANKS BUT I READ THOSE LYRICS YOU GUYS ARE REFERRING TOO AND THEY HAVE JUST ABOUT NOTHING TO DO WITH THIS SONG THAT I WROTE. BUT THANKS I AM GLAD SOMEONE IS FINDING THE MEANINGS IN MY SONGS.

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Re: CAUGHT IN BETWEEN (review please)

Post by bitwhys » Thu Mar 09, 2006 8:12 am

That "THE PAIN WE SUFFER IS WHAT KEEPS US GOING" is far too Ricardian in its cynicism for my liking is probably more a matter of taste than outlook, but I must admit I found the blue font camoflage to be utterly poetic in its own right.
"Its a curious thing that God learned Greek when he wished to turn author - and that he did not learn it better" - Nietzsche

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