With You

[becw75]

Hi Guys,

What are you thoughts on this song?
It's not intended for country, but for pop or advertising.
There is a singer songwriter demo on my Taxi Page (link below).
Here's a link for a private Soundcloud.... https://soundcloud.com/rebecca-walker-m ... 01/s-Cq1VO

Thanks everyone win advance,
Happy Holidays to All.

Bec

Above my head,
I feel your breath and warm heartbeat
Perfect heartbeat
Oooh ooh

Beneath your head, on your chest
You know I’m watching
You know I’m wanting
You - ooh

I wanna travel the world
Discover you are the one
Be the one
Wake up with you
ooh ooh

(Your) kindness over time
convinced the space around me
that you ok
ooh ooh

I’ve been a little slow to show
you how much I want you,
and i want too
ooh - ooh

I wanna travel the world
Discover you are the one
Be the one
Wake up with you
ooh ooh