Ears on My New Song

WeWillWriteUaSong · Post by **WeWillWriteUaSong** » Mon May 22, 2017 1:14 pm

Thanks for the comments. I made some subtle changes based on the notes. Thanks again

cosmicdolphin · Post by **cosmicdolphin** » Mon May 22, 2017 2:41 pm

Hey Marcus

Hope you are well mate, first listen to this and here is what stood out to me ( haven't read any other replies yet )

As I listen..

Cool bass...nice kick...great vox as always..nice mix

Maybe a bit bright on the clap/snare thing..percussion is a nice touch

25s to 40s ..hmmmm..track just lost some momentum for me..sounds like someone pasted in a section from a different song

Chorus is cool..feel like the song is back on track although I think the first Chorus is too busy and you could strip it back so each chorus can be bigger than the one before

Strings in verse 2 sound out of place to me and a bit half hearted. I think you either gotta really go for it and make a statement with ( a better version of ) them or leave them out

MIddle 8 / Bridge..I like it..Goes on too long though for me...I reckon you could maybe chop it in half and use that section in place of the Pre-Chorus bit I don't like.

Final Chorus..It doesn't really develop much from the first one , so I reckon strip others back a little and give yourself some place to go..I could also imagine you letting rip a little with another vocal line over the top in your higher range, some ad libs or something like you did on my song.

Overall I think you got two thirds of a cool track Marcus, I'm not sure it's "fun" enough for this listing..it's more of a sexy vibe.

I bet it gets forwarded now I said all that

Good luck with it !

fred · Post by **fred** » Tue May 23, 2017 10:25 am

Good start, really catchy hook. My interest has declined a little in between, from 0.24 to 0:40 .
Good job !

funsongs · Post by **funsongs** » Sun May 28, 2017 11:54 am

How/where do I send you a private message, Marcus?
Peter Rahill aka funsongs

WeWillWriteUaSong · Post by **WeWillWriteUaSong** » Fri Jul 21, 2017 3:24 pm

Happy to announce that I signed "My New Song" to 2 great nonexclusive libraries! Thanks for all the comments everyone.

cosmicdolphin · Post by **cosmicdolphin** » Fri Jul 21, 2017 4:04 pm

WeWillWriteUaSong wrote:Happy to announce that I signed "My New Song" to 2 great nonexclusive libraries! Thanks for all the comments everyone.

Cool..congrats, was that from the listing of some other contacts and did you tweak it any further?

Mark

WeWillWriteUaSong · Post by **WeWillWriteUaSong** » Fri Jul 21, 2017 6:15 pm

cosmicdolphin wrote: Cool..congrats, was that from the listing of some other contacts and did you tweak it any further?

Mark

Thanks Mark! The link as it is in this post is how it was signed by the 2 libs. And no, they were not from forwards. The one library I have been with for almost 2 years, and the other was a new lib for me. I first got in with them with a collaboration, and then after that I submitted some songs directly. This was a part of that audition group.

LOCK88 · Post by **LOCK88** » Sat Jul 22, 2017 5:43 pm

Congrats on the forward Marcus! Your are killing it bro, Keep it up!!
Robb

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