New Song " Shine "

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New Song " Shine "

Post by songmaster » Fri Sep 07, 2018 7:39 am

Hi everyone, once again I am asking for your help for this new song. I really think Josh did an amazing job on it and I would like to know what artist it sounds like and what genre this could fit into. The song is " Shine " on my Taxi page. Thank you in advance.

Tom

Shine ( NDF )

We are, two hearts, little stars in the sky
Here we, float on, our own wonder of this life
So we,need trust, for love to be true
No lies, can rise, above us like a paper moon
Ooh Ooh Ooh, whatever happens I know

Together, you and I we will always shine
Where ever, we live life, we will always shine
Come through this fire with me
Lets burn the night until we
Shine, shine, shine, until we
Shine, shine shine.

We never know when our two worlds will collide
But we've learned how, how to turn from a fight
Love is, the grace, that saves, you and me
By far, our hearts everlasting gravity
Ooh Ooh Ooh, whatever our future holds

Chorus

Bridge

The darker the night
The brighter we shine
So, lets shine on..

Chorus...end

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Re: New Song " Shine "

Post by JohnnyP » Sat Sep 08, 2018 7:19 am

Hi Tom. Well done! I don't listen to a lot anymore except for Alt Rock so I'm not the best ears on this but my initial thought was AC. I don't have any "ala's" cause I don't spend a lot of time on AC stations but the general feel of your song had me thinking in that genre. Hope that helps a little. Best, John
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Re: New Song " Shine "

Post by nicotina » Sat Sep 08, 2018 4:01 pm

Tom,

Great song, vocal, and production. It reminds me of Dan Wilson (guy from Supersonic), but of course he writes his own songs. I don't know about genre. Maybe Adult Contemporary? When Ed Sheeran sings things like this, they call it Pop.

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Re: New Song " Shine "

Post by nicotina » Sat Sep 08, 2018 4:02 pm

Ha, I meant Semisonic, not Supersonic.

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Re: New Song " Shine "

Post by songmaster » Sun Sep 09, 2018 6:39 am

Thanks John! I think your right on with the A/C genre. Actually when I wrote the song I was aiming for a Ed Sheeran type song. Kind of introspective and I think he is becoming more A/C lately . The production is not quite Ed Sheeran but I still like it. Thanks for the help :)

Thanks Vince for honing in on my Ed Sheeran attempt. Even though I sometimes know the genre I am aiming for, I don't let people know, because i want them to tell me as a confirmation, so thank you. I will look into Dan Wilson also, sounds interesting. " Semisonic " got cha!

Tom

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