Give me feedback, or give me death!

[LoBellver]

Here's the track:
https://youtu.be/TkkzVrAnx-Q

[ttully]

Hey LoBeliever,

I'm not sure if this is for a listing or not.... but....

It seems a very dated and repetitious.
Add some glitches, gated studders and drops.
Add some filters and stops and starts.....


My 2 cents worth,
Tim

[LoBellver]

When you say dated you mean 80s or 90s?

[annalynchmusic]

Some of this I would think 80's, which has TOTALLY made a comeback recently eg Stranger Things/ Drive, although there are some bits where it goes back to 70's like at the 2:15 mark, think Forensic Files scrolling credits, which could totally work, depending on the listing you are pitching to.

I think this has a lot of potential!
Good luck!
-Anna

[LoBellver]

I actually don't know what genre I should label it. ¿Any clue?

[annalynchmusic]

This isn't my primary genre, so I could sound like a total dweeb here but, I would label it as "instrumental electronica" or for track that sounds dated, "retro" instrumental Electronica.
I am sure within this there are many sub-genres where you can be more specific...However speaking for someone not familiar with those, simpler description is better.
I am sure you have heard this, but just know your audience, be honest with your strengths and weaknesses. Your strength might be creating retro sounding electronic tracks. Go for it!
Anna