Susan,
Definitely improved! The only last thing I'll throw out there to consider is possibly throwing in some very small velocity variations on the sitar when it does any repeating notes. It might help keep it from sounding like a plugin for those few moments a critical ear might be listening for something that doesn't sound natural.
Overall, great job! Best of luck with it!!
Andrew
Middle Eastern/Indian Chill ears please
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Re: Middle Eastern/Indian Chill ears please
I loved it. Great 'sitar' playing, the phrasing and melodies. The groove definitely fits the listing.
The only thing I'd suggest is maybe a subtle flute (or something) counterpoint in the second half.
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The only thing I'd suggest is maybe a subtle flute (or something) counterpoint in the second half.
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Re: Middle Eastern/Indian Chill ears please
Hi Mike! Thanks for listening and for the compliments which I do appreciate. The "sitar" takes quite a bit of finagling to get it to sound right and the melodies flowed after I had some of the grooves in the way I wanted. I agree about the 2nd half and actually did change that up a bit already on my Mix 2. Anyway I was wondering how to embed the SC tracks here, so great! Thanks! Susanmikehamm123 wrote: ↑Fri Apr 05, 2019 8:15 amI loved it. Great 'sitar' playing, the phrasing and melodies. The groove definitely fits the listing.
The only thing I'd suggest is maybe a subtle flute (or something) counterpoint in the second half.
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Re: Middle Eastern/Indian Chill ears please
Works for me.Susanstunes wrote: ↑Fri Apr 05, 2019 5:07 pmThe "sitar" takes quite a bit of finagling to get it to sound right and the melodies flowed after I had some of the grooves in the way I wanted
I have to say you ‘got it’ with this request—I’ve been struggling, and I’ve usually done well with ‘middle eastern’ listings.
I think its the ‘chill/pop element’ I’m not getting.
Anyway you should get a forward out of this one.
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