Project feedback....TV / FILM Rock Ballad

[rockinrob]

Working on a film/tv song for future pitch. Work in progress. Could use some constructive criticism on what direction to take it. I feel there is some substance to it. Thanks...


https://soundcloud.com/user-787705464/will-you

[ResonantTone]

Hey Rob,

It's a bit tough to throw advice out for something without a listing.. but having said that, I think some bigger dynamics with the instrumentation could help take it to the next level. It has some slight variations, but not enough to take the listener on a journey like it should in my opinion.

Good luck with the song!

Andrew

[rockinrob]

How bout for an intro to a time change rock song. ?

[DannyWeber]

How bout for an intro to a time change rock song. ?

Hey Rob,

I don't know if a time change would work.. that's something you would have to experiment with.
I do think you could work in some chord changes around you excellent vocal!

You could probably change chords a few times without re-doing the vocal. Maybe even the same chord a few steps up or down might do it.

You do some nice singing in your music, Rob.. like I've said before.. Authentic and heart-felt. This one just needs a little work in the musical background.
Adding bass guitar might help too.

Just suggestions, for what it's worth.

Dan

[rockinrob]

Thank you sir. I think I will go ahead and develop it. I appreciate the kind words and encouragement. I've heard your stuff and it certainly lends the credibility to that. Thanks again