Project feedback....TV / FILM Rock Ballad

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Project feedback....TV / FILM Rock Ballad

Post by rockinrob » Sun Apr 14, 2019 10:48 am

Working on a film/tv song for future pitch. Work in progress. Could use some constructive criticism on what direction to take it. I feel there is some substance to it. Thanks...


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Re: Project feedback....TV / FILM Rock Ballad

Post by ResonantTone » Sun Apr 14, 2019 5:38 pm

Hey Rob,

It's a bit tough to throw advice out for something without a listing.. but having said that, I think some bigger dynamics with the instrumentation could help take it to the next level. It has some slight variations, but not enough to take the listener on a journey like it should in my opinion.

Good luck with the song! :)

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Re: Project feedback....TV / FILM Rock Ballad

Post by rockinrob » Wed Apr 17, 2019 6:09 pm

How bout for an intro to a time change rock song. ?

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Re: Project feedback....TV / FILM Rock Ballad

Post by DannyWeber » Wed Apr 17, 2019 6:25 pm

rockinrob wrote:
Wed Apr 17, 2019 6:09 pm
How bout for an intro to a time change rock song. ?
Hey Rob,

I don't know if a time change would work.. that's something you would have to experiment with.
I do think you could work in some chord changes around you excellent vocal!

You could probably change chords a few times without re-doing the vocal. Maybe even the same chord a few steps up or down might do it.

You do some nice singing in your music, Rob.. like I've said before.. Authentic and heart-felt. This one just needs a little work in the musical background.
Adding bass guitar might help too.

Just suggestions, for what it's worth.

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Re: Project feedback....TV / FILM Rock Ballad

Post by rockinrob » Thu Apr 18, 2019 8:18 am

Thank you sir. I think I will go ahead and develop it. I appreciate the kind words and encouragement. I've heard your stuff and it certainly lends the credibility to that. Thanks again

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