CURRENT-SOUNDING (sparse) RAP/HIP-HOP INSTRUMENTAL -- ears needed!

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Re: CURRENT-SOUNDING (sparse) RAP/HIP-HOP INSTRUMENTAL -- ears needed!

Post by ronnie35 » Wed Jun 05, 2019 10:01 pm

Tom I like it My only thing is the intro and the intro in the middle it is in time but, I start to feel the groove when the claps enter before that it sounds to stiff almost syncopated

Nice job

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Post by CTWF » Tue Jun 11, 2019 2:13 pm

I think the groove is now better established right from the start. The mid section is possibly less deviant. Tom


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Re: CURRENT-SOUNDING (sparse) RAP/HIP-HOP INSTRUMENTAL -- ears needed!

Post by CTWF » Tue Jun 11, 2019 2:18 pm

ronnie35 wrote:
Wed Jun 05, 2019 10:01 pm
Tom I like it My only thing is the intro and the intro in the middle it is in time but, I start to feel the groove when the claps enter before that it sounds to stiff almost syncopated

Nice job

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Ron, thanks for commenting! I took your comment to heart (as I did with Andrew's) and tried to establish the groove earlier. Hope it works better... Tom

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Re: CURRENT-SOUNDING (sparse) RAP/HIP-HOP INSTRUMENTAL -- ears needed!

Post by CTWF » Wed Jun 12, 2019 1:06 am

I submitted this version (SoundCloud link ^). We will see... Tom

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Re: CURRENT-SOUNDING (sparse) RAP/HIP-HOP INSTRUMENTAL -- ears needed!

Post by ResonantTone » Wed Jun 12, 2019 6:53 am

Hey Tom,

Just listened to your updated version. MUCH better in my opinion!

Hopin it gets forwarded for ya!

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Re: CURRENT-SOUNDING (sparse) RAP/HIP-HOP INSTRUMENTAL -- ears needed!

Post by CTWF » Wed Jun 12, 2019 9:46 am

ResonantTone wrote:
Wed Jun 12, 2019 6:53 am
Hey Tom,

Just listened to your updated version. MUCH better in my opinion!

Hopin it gets forwarded for ya!

Andrew
Thanks Andrew!

I know I did not do everything that you recommended - since I lacked ideas - but I'll also keep the comments for future reference.

Earlier, I put it on the car speakers, driving back and forth from Kindergarten. They got knocked pretty well! I felt like one of these 18 year old Bozos that drive past our house every now and then, where the whole back of the car is subwoofer. Not sure what the other parents thought... :lol:

Tom

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