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Feedback on Urban Dramedy

Post by harperpeterson » Mon Jun 17, 2019 8:02 pm

Hey, y'all! I've been MIA for the past month or so because I moved! But now I'm getting settled in and back in the groove of things :D

This song isn't for a particular listing per say, but I wanted to get some feedback nonetheless! This is the first mix. Any comments regarding arrangement, mixing, sounds, etc, etc are welcome.

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Post by jaywilliams » Fri Jun 21, 2019 9:19 am

Hey Harper was hoping someone more knowledgeable would weigh in, I have to say, having reviewed your track twice now, I quite like it! Catchy, clear sounding, modern arrangement and instrumentations. Sounds great! Jay :)
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Post by VanderBoegh » Fri Jun 21, 2019 10:13 am

Sounds great, Harper! I'd watch the volume on some of your swells & reverses though. Like, at :20, that reverse cymbal is pretty overpowering. Good arrangement and composition though, just fine-tune some elements of the mix a tad more.

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Re: Feedback on Urban Dramedy

Post by harperpeterson » Sat Jun 22, 2019 12:30 pm

jaywilliams wrote:
Fri Jun 21, 2019 9:19 am
Hey Harper was hoping someone more knowledgeable would weigh in, I have to say, having reviewed your track twice now, I quite like it! Catchy, clear sounding, modern arrangement and instrumentations. Sounds great! Jay :)
Hey, Jay! Thank you, I appreciate your feedback! :D

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Re: Feedback on Urban Dramedy

Post by harperpeterson » Sat Jun 22, 2019 12:32 pm

VanderBoegh wrote:
Fri Jun 21, 2019 10:13 am
Sounds great, Harper! I'd watch the volume on some of your swells & reverses though. Like, at :20, that reverse cymbal is pretty overpowering. Good arrangement and composition though, just fine-tune some elements of the mix a tad more.

~~Matt
Thanks for taking the time, Matt! I’ll definitely check out some levels. These comments mean a lot coming from you! It’s good to know I’m heading in the right direction :D

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Re: Feedback on Urban Dramedy

Post by ResonantTone » Sun Jun 23, 2019 4:48 pm

Hey Harper!

Sounds great to me! I agree with Matt about the swells and stuff. Minor things, but overall I think you nailed it! :)

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Re: Feedback on Urban Dramedy

Post by harperpeterson » Tue Jun 25, 2019 5:50 pm

ResonantTone wrote:
Sun Jun 23, 2019 4:48 pm
Hey Harper!

Sounds great to me! I agree with Matt about the swells and stuff. Minor things, but overall I think you nailed it! :)

Andrew
Thanks, Andrew! I appreciate your input :)

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