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Hey All.
I’ve been working on this tune with Magne Kolstad and we could use your help. I originally did the vocal to the backing tracking you hear as the second song on the playlist. I sent Magne the vocals and then he completely changed the backing track to what you hear as number 1 on the playlist.
https://soundcloud.com/buzztracks/sets/thoughts/s-chXYy
Now, we really like both of them so we were wondering which one you think is more syncable.
Thanks for listening.
I’ve been working on this tune with Magne Kolstad and we could use your help. I originally did the vocal to the backing tracking you hear as the second song on the playlist. I sent Magne the vocals and then he completely changed the backing track to what you hear as number 1 on the playlist.
https://soundcloud.com/buzztracks/sets/thoughts/s-chXYy
Now, we really like both of them so we were wondering which one you think is more syncable.
Thanks for listening.
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Hi John, I hate to step in the middle of a production tug-of-war but since you asked, I find the 2nd mix to be more engaging and warm, the first track on the play list didn't capture my attention.
Hope this helps!
Jay
Hope this helps!
Jay
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FWIW: liking the textures and dynamics of #2. Even still - I was expecting a bigger build/hit for the Verse beginning around :59... maybe just some bottom end/bass - brushes/drums?
2 pennies to rub together. Guess that means I sorta agree with Jay's comment.
2 pennies to rub together. Guess that means I sorta agree with Jay's comment.
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I like the instrumental arrangement better on track 1, but I like the vocal arrangement better on track 2. Perhaps a track 3 is in order? Good luck!
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Hi John
I think both songs are great, but I agree with the others that the second version to my ears is the more pleasing one. Nice arrangement, I hope that helps.
Tom
I think both songs are great, but I agree with the others that the second version to my ears is the more pleasing one. Nice arrangement, I hope that helps.
Tom
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track 1 with me for sure. however i think it needs to build more on the chorus, it sounds a bit flat and monotonous the way it is now, both the arrangement and the melody, there's no lift. a melody popped into my head when i heard it. if you send me the bed i can put it on and send it back to if you wanna hear. is magne kolstad a norwegian? i'm from norway
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