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Patriotic/Country song - in the can, sort of...
I Am An American - still in search of the right/proper Country male lead voice & vocal performance. Comments, feedback welcome - thanks.
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Re: Patriotic/Country song - in the can, sort of...
Man, great sounding recording! Where'd ya get it done?
Did you just write it or did you also produce/play on it?
Did you just write it or did you also produce/play on it?
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I'm not really into Americana ( although ironically I am working on some hybrid orchestral / Americana type instrumentals at the moment ) so take with a grain of salt.
It' all sounds professionaly played...until the singing starts. Definitely needs a stronger vocalist IMHO.
Melody seems jaunty enough. I've probably never watched a TV Show that might use something like this and maybe we don't even get them in England. Was this for a listing ? References ?
Lyrically I'm not very keen, it comes across terribly corny and jingoistic to these British ears. Different attitudes I guess ? ..I don't think we really go in much for Patriotism here so just an outside perspective.
Definitely get a better singer though.
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It' all sounds professionaly played...until the singing starts. Definitely needs a stronger vocalist IMHO.
Melody seems jaunty enough. I've probably never watched a TV Show that might use something like this and maybe we don't even get them in England. Was this for a listing ? References ?
Lyrically I'm not very keen, it comes across terribly corny and jingoistic to these British ears. Different attitudes I guess ? ..I don't think we really go in much for Patriotism here so just an outside perspective.
Definitely get a better singer though.
Mark
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Re: Patriotic/Country song - in the can, sort of...
Yep - the vocal thing - not a surprise. Just haven't found one that has worked, yet.cosmicdolphin wrote: ↑Tue Nov 12, 2019 4:01 pmI'm not really into Americana ( although ironically I am working on some hybrid orchestral / Americana type instrumentals at the moment ) so take with a grain of salt.
It' all sounds professionaly played...until the singing starts. Definitely needs a stronger vocalist IMHO.
Melody seems jaunty enough. I've probably never watched a TV Show that might use something like this and maybe we don't even get them in England. Was this for a listing ? References ?
Lyrically I'm not very keen, it comes across terribly corny and jingoistic to these British ears. Different attitudes I guess ? ..I don't think we really go in much for Patriotism here so just an outside perspective.
Definitely get a better singer though.
Mark
For what it's worth, Lee Greenwood had a monster hit with his very patriotic "God Bless The U.S.A." - it's sorta in that ballpack.
No - not for a specific listing; more along the lines of an artist pitch.
Thanks for the ears and comments.
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Thank you. I employed a cast of my 'regular' Nashville Cats to record the instruments.SeanHMusic wrote: ↑Tue Nov 12, 2019 3:10 pmMan, great sounding recording! Where'd ya get it done?
Did you just write it or did you also produce/play on it?
The scratch vocals and mixing were recorded in San Diego, where I directed the mix & production.
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For what it's worth, some folks I know from a different part of the world, where they were raising young kids, remarked to me something like,CTWF wrote: ↑Wed Nov 13, 2019 3:04 pmHey Peter, I know that is yourself singing - and that is pretty good! However, I would agree that he track could benefit from a stronger voice (but don't ask me, because I only do chipmunk... ). As I have written before, I can easily see this in a documentary of sorts, e.g. historic, biographic, or travel. Maybe you could process the voice somehow (layering, Melodyne, chorus/reverb, I don't know) and it would work without vocals from elsewhere?
For the patriotism thing - Mark has just taught me a new word! But there definitely is a major difference in attitude - even more so if you compare US vs. Germany. I guess we've just messed up once too often between 1914 and 1945, so unconditional patriotism for a long time was and still is seen as problematic. Very different story in the US, of course, where there also is less of a sense of national guilt about the (in comparison smaller) mess-ups of the past. But let's not get political (forum rules!). Fact is, spending several weeks a year in the Midwest/Lakes region, there is a major difference in this regard to some (if not all) parts of Europe.
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Thanks for your comments.
And - as previously stated - I am STILL on the hunt for the right vocalist for this collaboration.
Cheers.
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Re: Patriotic/Country song - in the can, sort of...
hey Peter - the vocals may not be as big of a concern as you think it is.
This track is currently still pending for 3 listings so we should have screener feedback any week now.
Will keep you posted, have a great weekend!
Jay
This track is currently still pending for 3 listings so we should have screener feedback any week now.
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I get that, Jay - and thank you for pursuing the song's opportunities & future, on the basis of its content.jaywilliams wrote: ↑Fri Nov 15, 2019 10:16 amhey Peter - the vocals may not be as big of a concern as you think it is.
This track is currently still pending for 3 listings so we should have screener feedback any week now.
Will keep you posted, have a great weekend!
Jay
Notwithstanding, I recognize the high-bar concerns and critiques regarding the vocal performance.
If I/we find 'the right' voice for the track - then, most certainly that will improve the quality of the track.
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Whilst I've not seen the listings or heard the references I think you're underestimating precisely how high the bar is for a broadcast quality vocal.jaywilliams wrote: ↑Fri Nov 15, 2019 10:16 amhey Peter - the vocals may not be as big of a concern as you think it is.
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We are aware.cosmicdolphin wrote: ↑Fri Nov 15, 2019 12:50 pmWhilst I've not seen the listings or heard the references I think you're underestimating precisely how high the bar is for a broadcast quality vocal.jaywilliams wrote: ↑Fri Nov 15, 2019 10:16 amhey Peter - the vocals may not be as big of a concern as you think it is.
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