EDGY POP SONGS with a PUNK ROCK ATTITUDE Can anyone offer input??

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EDGY POP SONGS with a PUNK ROCK ATTITUDE Can anyone offer input??

Post by Dtoy » Sun Jan 12, 2020 3:20 pm

This has not been mixed yet,, but I'm looking for some input as I'm working through the song....

I've been getting gun shy with my submissions to Taxi lately,,, nothing I submit is getting forwarded.

the song below is for a listing for: EDGY POP SONGS with a PUNK ROCK ATTITUDE

https://soundcloud.com/deriktoy/invisible-bounce-vox1

Again its not mixed,, so be gentle, but I'm working on the song today and would love any input you guys could offer.

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Post by lesmac » Sun Jan 12, 2020 5:00 pm

Nice song!

I only have a limited time to listen and comment. It will be good to hear this mixed after you've panned the guitars a bit away from the vocal and added some vocal fx. I imagine her voice could take a little saturation as well as the delay reverb usual suspects. The voice sounds like it will cut through with a little help.

I would like to hear the song staying dynamic not squashed and to hear some differentiation with the guitars. Remove some mud. That guitar stab at 06 is cool, maybe it could bite more. That being said the lows need some taming as the mix is bright at the moment.
Some of the highs are ear cutting trying to compete.

Cant listen in the studio again till the weekend.

I like the energy, nice track.

Look forward to hearing post mix.

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Post by Dtoy » Sun Jan 12, 2020 5:19 pm

Thx for the input Lester! working on it now...

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Post by OldTom » Mon Jan 13, 2020 7:45 pm

I like it,
Sounds to me like you have all the elements there.
Great "B" section / Bridge. Made me want a different ending, Resolutions musically in this genre are usually a "drop the mic" kind of stinger.
I'm looking forward to the mixed version.
Nice work!
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Re: EDGY POP SONGS with a PUNK ROCK ATTITUDE Can anyone offer input??

Post by Dtoy » Tue Jan 14, 2020 10:19 pm

Thx Tom!

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