Request to Review Solo Piano

[LongBlackNight]

This was written as a "somber" piano piece. Thank you for your comments.

https://www.taxi.com/members/jsinek

The piece is Now Sets the Sun at the top of the page.

[jefflaplante]

Hello. This is well performed and impressive.
There are some unnatural silences at :10 and :21 that almost sound like the track stops abruptly, as if my device suddenly stopped working. Maybe this is a problem with the sustain pedal or the sustain function of the virtual piano you are using. Check this out and see if you hear the same thing. Otherwise, I really enjoyed it.

Jeff

[Steverino]

Hi JP,

I really enjoyed your solo piano piece. I agree with the other person's comment that there are a few 'unnatural silences'. It sounds like the piano just cuts-off to silence, rather than a key that is lifted, but still has a resonance afterwards. You have definitely created a somber mood in this piece.

Best,
Steve

[LongBlackNight]

Thank you both, Jeff and Steve, for taking the time. I listened a few times trying to gain your perspective on the unnatural silences, but I think I want those. Still, I'll consider your remarks and keep my mind open. You have quite a few interesting and playful pieces, yourself, Steve. Best of luck to both of you. -jp