Is There Too Much Going On In This Dramedy?

[youseeitsme]

That's a really good sounding well produced track. I don't think it's necessarily too busy and there are some good edit points. I think the only suggestion I would make is dropping the staccato strings counter hits in at least one portion of the track. It's being used throughout the whole track and definitely gives the right vibe but maybe one section a bit more stripped down and less dependent on that element might give the overall track some additional variation. I hope that helps.