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[cosmicdolphin]

Nice tracks on Soundcloud by the way.

Thanks, hope that helps

[gitanosoy]

Nice tracks on Soundcloud by the way.

Thanks, hope that helps

Yes it does, I will apply all these suggestion in my next Hip-Hop track for upcoming submission.

Thanks for you time.

[Peterg]

Thank you Peter..that is some good feed back specially about the tension but I am still not sure about the development asI add more string parts wouldn't that count as a development or are you reffering to the beat.?

I think after the intro, where sounds are introduced and there are some nice hi hat and snare skips, the overall mood then continues as a 2 bar loop, without much noticeable change. By the time the strings start to build I think the track has already given the impression of being too repetitive

Peter