Hey folks, (Ethan???)
I've got a song that I think I'm ready to send to a vocalist (don't mind the playing, singing, low level, these are rough tracks coz I don't know what key it will end up in ). Anyway my issue is the hook has changed several times. From "I can't come to a full stop" , "My heart can't come to a full stop" to "My heart won't come to a full stop". The thought I'm trying to convey is "I still love you". If I tried to sing "My love won't come to a full stop" I think it would sound like I'm talking to the person- ie "my love" (the person won't come to a full stop) lol.
So my question is - in this version I've sung the hook the same the first 2x. Then started changing it in the ad-lib section and into the final chorus. Does this strike your ears as odd? Should I just stay with the hook as it is in C1 and C2? My gut is telling me to go back to my original hook "I can't come, I can't come no no I.. I can't come to a full stop"
