Feedback For Modern Sad Strings and Piano

[Peterg]

It’s a really nice piece, violin sounds great. I agree with most of the comments, especially the 2 edit points Pauline mentions. I think it needs a bit of variation in the piano, you could start the piano more sparse at 13 secs with just the chord sustaining for the whole bar, maybe add a bit of extra movement after 8 bars or so , leading to the edit point at 47secs before the piano comes in fully.
Also maybe later on another cello type string part could come in just playing the root notes.
Good luck

Peter

[RickBourassa]

Song is submitted (along with one other) .

Thank you for all of the feedback.

Fingers are crossed.