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Submission for TAXI # S210904AM

Post by DouglasKnight » Wed Sep 01, 2021 5:21 pm

Hey all - Wanted to share another submission for the Ambient/Meditaion posting called "You're Not Alone": https://www.taxi.com/members/Gjdf7sdFR5 ... -not-alone

I'm looking for any constructive feedback before submitting. Thanks, DK

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Post by AlanHall » Wed Sep 01, 2021 7:15 pm

Nice track, very contemporary!

If I had to offer constructive feedback, I'd say I wasn't expecting the guitar's "chug chug" at the very tail end. I felt the sound was headed towards simply 'evaporating' at that point.

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Re: Submission for TAXI # S210904AM

Post by DouglasKnight » Wed Sep 01, 2021 7:53 pm

AlanHall wrote:
Wed Sep 01, 2021 7:15 pm
Nice track, very contemporary!

If I had to offer constructive feedback, I'd say I wasn't expecting the guitar's "chug chug" at the very tail end. I felt the sound was headed towards simply 'evaporating' at that point.
Ah, yes, could be a bit jarring, agreed. Will re-visit the ending again on this one...thanks!

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Re: Submission for TAXI # S210904AM

Post by swdaze » Thu Sep 02, 2021 8:49 am

Very nice track. I get a U2 on acid vibe, a compliment.

My only question is is it a little fast for meditation? IDK, still ...oh cool .... like the echoing guitar....did you change the ending? Thought it was cool but the guitar might be a little loud.

Good luck!!

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Re: Submission for TAXI # S210904AM

Post by DouglasKnight » Thu Sep 02, 2021 8:57 pm

swdaze wrote:
Thu Sep 02, 2021 8:49 am
Very nice track. I get a U2 on acid vibe, a compliment.

My only question is is it a little fast for meditation? IDK, still ...oh cool .... like the echoing guitar....did you change the ending? Thought it was cool but the guitar might be a little loud.

Good luck!!

Geo
Yes, Geo - I think you're right, it's leaning more to a post-rock piece than a meditation bed-track. I've composed a new one tonight and will post it as well... Thanks for listening and the helpful feedback!. DK

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