Country/Blues song - 9-1-21 MIX
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Country/Blues song - 9-1-21 MIX
MIX feedback welcome (not for a particular listing at this time)
The lyrics are there in the scroll down "show more" section on the song's individual page - which you get to by clicking on the song title.
In advance; thank you.
The lyrics are there in the scroll down "show more" section on the song's individual page - which you get to by clicking on the song title.
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Re: Country/Blues song - 9-1-21 MIX
Hey, nice job -- sounded very nice overall! To my ears, the piano seems to muddy the mix and fight with all of the other nice elements happening. I would try a version with no piano and see if you agree. Also, the high end seems really boosted on the vocal, so my vote is to warm that up a bit as well. Anyway, best of luck with it!
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Re: Country/Blues song - 9-1-21 MIX
Thanks - we can take that into consideration before the final mix/master.DouglasKnight wrote: ↑Wed Sep 01, 2021 4:57 pm
Hey, nice job -- sounded very nice overall! To my ears, the piano seems to muddy the mix and fight with all of the other nice elements happening. I would try a version with no piano and see if you agree. Also, the high end seems really boosted on the vocal, so my vote is to warm that up a bit as well. Anyway, best of luck with it!
TBH - the high-end boost on the vocal was/is intentional - so I'm glad it was noticeable.
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Re: Country/Blues song - 9-1-21 MIX
Maybe because of the EQ, the lower notes of the vocals are tending to get lost a bit, like "you" at 0:25. I might boost those words a bit.
Also, there's a typo in the lyrics:
He opened us eyes --> He opened up our eyes.
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Also, there's a typo in the lyrics:
He opened us eyes --> He opened up our eyes.
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Re: Country/Blues song - 9-1-21 MIX
I think it's a great mix! I think it's good as is, but I'd also try to tweak a few things to see what it sounds like:
- I hear a small amount of harsh high frequency in the sibilance of the vocal, so that could benefit from some adjustment.
- Vocal might be a little loud or could use some more blending
- Would like to hear the bass boosted slightly
- Would like to hear the piano more around 2:30
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Re: Country/Blues song - 9-1-21 MIX
Thanks for that. Much appreciated.
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Re: Country/Blues song - 9-1-21 MIX
Looking into re-recording the entire piano track - soloing it, other issues emerged.NMN wrote: ↑Fri Sep 03, 2021 7:33 pmI think it's a great mix! I think it's good as is, but I'd also try to tweak a few things to see what it sounds like:
- I hear a small amount of harsh high frequency in the sibilance of the vocal, so that could benefit from some adjustment.
- Vocal might be a little loud or could use some more blending
- Would like to hear the bass boosted slightly
Good luck with the track!
- Would like to hear the piano more around 2:30
Still a work-in-progress.
Thanks.
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