Feedback for Happy Clappy Listing Instrumental Cue

[DennisPMusic]

HI

Am I on the right path with this song?
https://www.taxi.com/members/a9Q_Ye0vSv ... istle-song


"HAPPY, CLAPPY" ACOUSTIC POP INSTRUMENTAL CUES are needed by an extremely busy Music Library with a tremendously long list of killer placements in Hit TV Shows!

This Library is on the hunt for a bunch of Mid-to-Up-Tempo Instrumental Cues that are in the general stylistic ballpark of these references we got directly from them:

Chewy Commercial

"Carefree" by Kevin MacLeod

"Make It Shine" by Sophonic Media

"Spring In My Step" by Silent Partner

Please send well-produced Acoustic Pop Instrumentals with a happy-go-lucky vibe and sound. Your submissions should have bouncy rhythms, polished production, and top-notch Acoustic-based instrumentation – think ukulele, acoustic guitar, snaps, glockenspiel, etc. – and don't forget those claps! Craft your Cues around a singular, feel-good motif, and create a sense of forward momentum and dynamics by layering instrumentation in and out as they progress. If you plan on using any virtual instruments or samples, they need to sound like the real thing and can't be stiff or low-quality

[DouglasKnight]

This is fantastic and I think it's right on target for the listing. Really good!

[superkons]

It really is a lovely tune! My only remark would be to bring 1 or 2 new instruments to take the lead melody, I was getting a bit of ear fatigue because of the whistling repeating the melodic elements all the way through

[DennisPMusic]

It really is a lovely tune! My only remark would be to bring 1 or 2 new instruments to take the lead melody, I was getting a bit of ear fatigue because of the whistling repeating the melodic elements all the way through

Thanks for your comment.
I have doubled the lead melody with some key sounds in the last part of the song, but maybe they should be turned up a little more:-).

[DennisPMusic]

This is fantastic and I think it's right on target for the listing. Really good!

Thanks a lot Douglas:-)