PERCUSSION-Based INSTRUMENTAL

[melodea]

I like it. Maybe a more crescendo end part would be appropriate. Otherwise, it's good to go! I think this listing is a tough one to get past the screener's firewall. On one hand, it has to be SIMPLE, SIMPLE with just ONE motif but has not to be too repetitive and has to have a nice building arc within 2 min with only percussion:? Let's make a square circle then Good luck!

[DouglasKnight]

You covered all the appropriate bases. Well done, brother!

Thank you -- very much appreciated! Hope the screener and client agrees

All the best,
Doug

[DouglasKnight]

I like it. Maybe a more crescendo end part would be appropriate. Otherwise, it's good to go! I think this listing is a tough one to get past the screener's firewall. On one hand, it has to be SIMPLE, SIMPLE with just ONE motif but has not to be too repetitive and has to have a nice building arc within 2 min with only percussion:? Let's make a square circle then Good luck!

Good point about the crescendo -- I know big endings are important, and will see if I can beef it up a bit. Yes, this one is a challenge, keeping things interesting for 2 minutes without introducing new ideas or being repetitive! Thanks for the feedback, Doug

[karafinman]

I thought you'd like to know I just played this in front of my class (they needed a break, so I just checked out the forum) and this kid said "it sounds like one of those annoying ads". So you hit it right on the head.