My 1st Forward!
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My 1st Forward!
Hey everyone, I am so thrilled I received my first forward yesterday for S220606RM for modern relationship based songs. I totally appreciate its early days and I have a long way to go but this has really cheered me up. I have been with Taxi just over a month and can't wait to see what the future holds, hopefully I will get to meet some of you at the Rally in November. Here is the link to the song called 'In Denial' if anyone would like to have a listen, its a lot darker and sensual than I would usually write but clearly it worked!
Would love your feedback so have linked below, thanks everyone and have a really lovely day
https://www.taxi.com/members/rrPSohd0Rm ... -in-denial
Lindsay H (from rainy England)
Would love your feedback so have linked below, thanks everyone and have a really lovely day
https://www.taxi.com/members/rrPSohd0Rm ... -in-denial
Lindsay H (from rainy England)
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Congratulations Lindsay
Your track sounds great, love the production and the held back vocal style with the layered harmonies. Very dark & dreamy. With a few tweaks I could imagine it being a Bond theme.
Good luck with it !
Mark ( also from England - Sunny Staffordshire)
Your track sounds great, love the production and the held back vocal style with the layered harmonies. Very dark & dreamy. With a few tweaks I could imagine it being a Bond theme.
Good luck with it !
Mark ( also from England - Sunny Staffordshire)
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Thank you so much for your super helpful feedback, I love Bond! Wrote a song actually for the last Bond film called Lost It All but Billies amazing song made it (understandably so, different league). Open to any tweak suggestions you have too! Thanks again p.s. you have sunshine!!?? Not so lucky in Brighton!
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It's a big yellow ball thing in between the showers
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Its sunny in south Yorkshire too . Congratulations on your first forward and good luck for many more.
Graham (UK). Still composing a little faster than decomposing, and 100% HI.
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Congratulations!!
An awesome track.
An awesome track.
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Nice track and congrats! First forward and many more.
Regarding the sunshine,I grew up in England...what sunshine, don't remember such a thing.
Regarding the sunshine,I grew up in England...what sunshine, don't remember such a thing.
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Well, hello Lindsay and hello nice music! Great vibe, good production, excellent vocals! I was just thinking, especially coming from TV/Film applications if there could have been more variations like bringing in new elements in Verse 2, a radical breakdown after two-thirds into the track with creepy strings (just my imagination), Don't get me wrong, the track is excellent but IMO it lacks a bit of top-end. Something like distorted guitars (in a bond kind of way) or some edgy synths could have put the cherry on top the cake.
Nonetheless, congrats on the well-deserved forward and I hope it will get signed and placed soon!
Best
Chris
Nonetheless, congrats on the well-deserved forward and I hope it will get signed and placed soon!
Best
Chris
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Congratulations, I love the song
Cheers Carol
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Super grateful for your feedback everyone, thank you very much! A number of people have mentioned Bond which is amazing if this song generates that kind of connection. Distorted guitar is a great idea, to give it a bit more complexity at the high end as you say, and creepy strings would be a good addition as it has a dark feel! Very different to what I usually do so will definitely work on pushing myself out of my comfort zone and being a little more experimental with less traditional sounds
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