Hi Dave, I'm not wishing to pile on the agony if you're finding this one difficult, just saying that I think Lester and Gitanosy are right that the swing in the rhythm guitar is out, and its mostly the offbeat that feels early. Once you get that swinging nicely, the lead guitar then needs to have a similar swing that sits comfortably with the rhythm. The keys are tight so no worries there, but if you loop a few bars around 1:35 you can hear how the guitars are falling off the rhythm and not working together.
I know from your previous posts that you do a great job with the slow and medium tempo blues tracks, but this one is quite demanding at such a brisk tempo. Perhaps if you just jam with the backing track for a while before recording it might help capture that swing feel. Also, even though it'd be great to nail the parts in full takes, there's no shame in a bit of editing or comping parts from different takes if needed. I'm confident you'll get there Dave. Good luck
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Graham (UK). Still composing a little faster than decomposing, and 100% HI.