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Re: I Can't Live Without You (for a collaboration)

Post by cosmicdolphin » Thu Jul 21, 2022 2:27 am

irwin wrote:
Wed Jul 20, 2022 9:13 pm
Hope I genuinely answer your question.
Yes it explains a lot. Thank You.

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Re: I Can't Live Without You (for a collaboration)

Post by Casey H » Thu Jul 21, 2022 5:01 am

Hi Irwin
Much more intelligible as just vocal. Suggested path for collaborating:
  • Have someone tune the vocal to stay on key.
  • Have them up with chords for the melody and make a simple piano/vocal or guitar/vocal. (Vocal can just be a melody guide)
  • Have the lyrics re-written as the are repetitive & cliche and don't have any story line, imagery, etc.
  • Then, if all is good, production and performance/vocal.
I see BuzzFeed offered to help so let's see how you guys do. Good luck!

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Post by funsongs » Thu Jul 21, 2022 8:25 am

+1 to Casey's comments -
take the offer that's been given.
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Re: I Can't Live Without You (for a collaboration)

Post by irwin » Thu Jul 21, 2022 2:01 pm

BuzzReed wrote:
Wed Jul 20, 2022 7:44 pm
Irwin

Great vocal, but I agree - a little help with some of the technical stuff. I’d be happy to flesh out a few things then pass it back to you.
I’ve worked with many artists this way and would love to take it on.

Paul (Buzz Reed)

Ps - loved Shart Pants!
Thanks for wanting to help Paul, I'd always wanted to work with someone who plays wind instrument.

Glad you love my song "Shart Pants"

I send you a PM

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Re: I Can't Live Without You (for a collaboration)

Post by irwin » Thu Jul 21, 2022 2:12 pm

funsongs wrote:
Thu Jul 21, 2022 8:25 am
+1 to Casey's comments -
take the offer that's been given.
Thanks for weighting in on this topic Peter, much appreciated.

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