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Lend Me Your Ears "

Post by JannieM » Sat Aug 06, 2022 10:15 am

It is my hope that I am not stepping on any musical toes, so please let me know if my tension instrumental sounds too familiar. And if so, in what way?
I have provided only the first 30 seconds and the piece starts out somewhat quietly. Also, I hope the link works. Thanks in advance for any help you can provide.

https://www.taxi.com/my/artist/songs/ar ... -unsettled

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Post by cosmicdolphin » Sat Aug 06, 2022 10:50 am

Your link doesn't work - search the forum and you will find out how to post so it works for others - or just use soundcloud

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Post by JannieM » Sat Aug 06, 2022 12:16 pm

Please try this link. I do not have soundcloud.

https://www.taxi.com/members/NK7W45vMQK ... -unsettled
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Post by funsongs » Sat Aug 06, 2022 2:49 pm

JannieM wrote:
Sat Aug 06, 2022 12:16 pm
Please try this link. I do not have soundcloud.

https://www.taxi.com/members/NK7W45vMQK ... -unsettled
It was a bit unsettling - but, yes - the link worked.
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Re: Lend Me Your Ears "

Post by cosmicdolphin » Sat Aug 06, 2022 2:51 pm

Usually best to post the whole thing, along with a copy of the listing and reference tracks.

It's hard to know with such a short clip and no references...it's somewhat atonal and drone like ...not really sure if the synth notes that are playing on top work for me , some of them sound out of key with the pedal tone and I can't really lock onto any sense of timing. Be perhaps that's what you were going for ?

Doesn't really remind me of anything.

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Post by JannieM » Sat Aug 06, 2022 3:54 pm

Thanks for taking the time to listen to my music. Yes, unsettling and drone-ish is what I am trying to accomplish. Thanks for your helpful comments.
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