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Re: Been away too long!

Post by LamarPecorino » Sun Aug 21, 2022 5:34 pm

myk247365 wrote:
Sun Aug 21, 2022 3:09 pm
I have some high-end hearing loss from playing drums for 30+ years and IMHO, the opening vocal needs some de-essing. The alliteration in the lyrics is great but there are several harsh "s" sounds in the first line. Also the "t" in "felt". Once you get to "want more" it's fine, but then the second part of the 1st verse is right on the edge of too much "s". Listen through the track and decide which "s" and "t" blend best and make the others match.

hope this helps.

Michael
Thanks for listening and writing, Michael. The song is in the process of being signed to a Music Library. We'll see what they want to do over the next few days.
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Re: Been away too long!

Post by myk247365 » Sun Oct 02, 2022 4:53 pm

congrats!

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