"Baby KISS my Face"?Casey H wrote: ↑Tue Jan 03, 2023 7:07 pmThe new recording with guitar is not a broadcast quality recording and the female vocal is not very good at all.
But more important, "Baby Punch My Face" comes off like it's promoting domestic violence which makes it a total non-starter. I know you've been pushing this song for 12 years now, but time to let it go. OR... Change it to "Baby KISS My Face" and change lyrics as needed to support that. "Baby Kiss My Face" and the rhyme with "basket case" still works and it a clever one. But you have to lose the violence.
Also, you are not going to get famous. Or at least it's 99.99% odds that you won't. Instead of working toward fame, a more reasonable goal would be get some tracks in music libraries and maybe get a TV placement.
Casey
Sounds like bubblegum "punk" even more bubble-gummy than Hanson's "Mmmm BOP."
How about "Baby SLAP my face"?
I am working on other songs, but until I hear something else that knocks my socks off, this song, well... People everywhere I sing it to love the violence in it. It humoruous violence. It is NOT meant to be domestic.
:BABY Punch My face," is like, Come on, BABY! Hit me with your best shot, baby! Come on, buster!"