Sentimental enough? For this listing?

[StevenE]

Hi i appreciate any constructive thoughts on my track for the listing SENTIMENTAL GUITAR INSTRUMENTALS and/or INSTRUMENTAL CUES

THANKS

Listing references:
https://youtu.be/1Y_Xx527yQ4

https://youtu.be/LQlcBdXnmX8

https://youtu.be/qtXrs0ZqX6w



MY SUBMISSION: Gratitude & Grace
https://soundcloud.com/user-168761198/gratitude-grace

[edmondredd]

Hey Steven!
Had a couple of listens to your cue, and my guess is that it might need some production love to it: maybe cleaning up the takes and reducing the brilliance of the highs?
I'm not an expert in guitar pieces but that's my $.2

[StevenE]

Hi Edmond Thanks for taking the time to listen to my track and making suggestions. Much appreciated.
Your "Forge of Destiny" is really impressive. Good luck with it.

Steven