Heartfelt Singer-Songwriter Tune

[Casey H]

On the hope that we can get this thread back on track, this is the original post by Pete who wanted feedback on his song...

My co-writer Todd and I put together this scratch/demo track yesterday for
the current listing here: https://www.taxi.com/industry#listing-S231112AC

From 0:00-2:42 is the part we're considering keeping - there's a break and then
outro after 2:42 that gets to be a bit too 90's IMO, so we're gonna take that out.

I just want to see what you all think re: does this 0:00-2:42 section sound like
it could be on a playlist with any of the references?

My initial thoughts are that it could be, if I simplify the vocal singing style, and
modify the melody a bit to be more in line with contemporary phrasing.

Regarding arrangement.. that will likely be a simple, building blend of acoustic guitar,
piano, brushes on snare + deep acoustic kick.

Any input is super helpful at this stage, thanks!

Song Link: https://www.taxi.com/members/0bmMlaH7Rn ... atch-demo-

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[AlanHall]

On the hope that we can get this thread back on track, this is the original post by Pete who wanted feedback on his song...

That didn't last long...