Hi guys,
This was my first time at producing a vocal track.
The screeners feedback for my track was: "I think you could improve this song by
Updating the production to the territory of songs like "Blinding Lights" by Loi is a thought to appeal to this request. I'm hearing more classic adult contemporary flavor in current form." and " returned or forwarded this song because
The rendition could be more current singer/songwriter styled for this request"
Blinding Lights by Loi
My Submissions:
Disco Playlist
What about my production makes it sound more adult contemporary vs singer/songwriter?
Singer/Songwriter Feedback S240123VR
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Re: Singer/Songwriter Feedback S240123VR
Just my opinion and I might be on the wrong trail, but when I hear your tracks I imagine a more mature singer with cultured vibrato and the vocal is surrounded by lots of reverb. When I hear the ref track the vocal is drier, closer, less cultured, less vibrato, more naive, more breathy, more intimate, and these things all suggest more youthful and modern to me. I hope that helps.
Graham (UK). Still composing a little faster than decomposing, and 100% HI.
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