do you think i fixed it

[jerrybeirne]

Well, artistically i still like the original although your revision sounds cleaner, but not as clean or "vanilla" as a Bm or D7/F#....then again only the screener can determine if your changes are worthy or not thus any advise from peers is mere speculation so take it with a grain of salt. FWIW a library would be more lenient per these subjective matters especially if you already have an established relationship

I'm right on board with you, I prefer the original version, but I get that a screener doesn't want the music to be too distracting. I don't write songs with Taxi in mind, rather I write them and then look for requests that might fit one of my songs. I'm sure lots of people are like that. But if making this little change in my song makes it more palatable here, then I appreciate the screener's critique.

Thanks again for your time and thoughts! This didn't do as well as my others songs commercially, so I may replace the audio in that version too.

Jerry