Help me understand please!
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Re: Help me understand please!
Thanks for sharing the track. Unfortunately, my impressions are pretty much the same as the screener.
I don't think the intro is long, but I thought the electric metal feel loop was too busy. I think this song would work even without this, and it would be simpler and more easily accepted.
Also, the final part leading up to the ending is a bit long, so in order to keep the listeners interested and tied to the sofa, I think they need to shorten the final part or make some improvements to that part. thought. Build-up is very important for songs that are used in top business.
The lesson I learned from Taxi Music is that complex tracks are never placed. I think it's important not to cram too much of what you want into a song.
I don't think the intro is long, but I thought the electric metal feel loop was too busy. I think this song would work even without this, and it would be simpler and more easily accepted.
Also, the final part leading up to the ending is a bit long, so in order to keep the listeners interested and tied to the sofa, I think they need to shorten the final part or make some improvements to that part. thought. Build-up is very important for songs that are used in top business.
The lesson I learned from Taxi Music is that complex tracks are never placed. I think it's important not to cram too much of what you want into a song.
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Re: Help me understand please!
Thanks for your comment. You’re absolutely right with the simplicity of tracks for sync. But the point here is that the listing mentioned was like most of the previous listing with same refs where my tracks with similar if not equal structure were forwarded. I criticized the fact, that it was not evident by reading the brief that this particular listing was so different from similar ones in the past.minoruchan wrote: ↑Sun Jan 28, 2024 8:52 pmThanks for sharing the track. Unfortunately, my impressions are pretty much the same as the screener.
I don't think the intro is long, but I thought the electric metal feel loop was too busy. I think this song would work even without this, and it would be simpler and more easily accepted.
Also, the final part leading up to the ending is a bit long, so in order to keep the listeners interested and tied to the sofa, I think they need to shorten the final part or make some improvements to that part. thought. Build-up is very important for songs that are used in top business.
The lesson I learned from Taxi Music is that complex tracks are never placed. I think it's important not to cram too much of what you want into a song.
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Re: Help me understand please!
Great track and an interesting discussion, thanks,
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