Seeking feedback for patriotic march

[bmoBauhaus]

I think it's almost there. Any thoughts on the timpani? Does it sound too loud? Does it sound 'almost' real?

Thanks!

My track:
https://www.taxi.com/members/N5SOUeh_Qe ... nd-loyalty

The brief:
Lots of ORIGINAL PATRIOTIC INSTRUMENTALS are needed by a very successful EXCLUSIVE Music Library. This company has a very long history of lots and lots of really AWESOME placements, tons of which have been for TAXI members!

NOTE: We have other listings running for this company's request for Patriotic COVERS. Please note that this one is for ORIGINAL compositions.

This Company is looking for Instrumentals that are in the style of the following references:

"Washington Post March" by John Williams, Boston Pops Orchestra, & John Philip Sousa

"Stars and Stripes Forever" by John Philip Sousa & The United States Marine Band

"America The Beautiful" by The United States Air Force Band

"Hail to the Chief" by James Sanderson & The United States Marine Band

"The Star Spangled Banner" by The United States Army Band

Please submit original Patriotic Instrumentals that capture the spirit and feel of the references. Compelling and Patriotic-sounding motifs are needed for this request.

VERY IMPORTANT: Traditional Arrangements ONLY, please!

Orchestral instrumentation that's in the general stylistic ballpark of the references will work best. Please make sure that any virtual instruments or samples you use are high-quality and sound like the real deal.

Do NOT copy the referenced artists or songs in any way, shape, or form. Use them only as a general guide for tempo, texture, tone, and overall vibe. Do NOT submit any material with unauthorized samples of any other artists’ music, sounds, or any other form of media. Broadcast Quality is needed.

IMPORTANT! Per our client, your submissions must:

1) NOT be encumbered by ANY other publishing, licensing, administration, and/or exploitation deals (whether non-exclusive or exclusive) including publishing/licensing agreements with CD Baby Pro, TuneCore, DistroKid, etc.

2) Be 100% original – no soundalikes, no covers, and no recordings with samples.

[SusanAnnNorberg]

Not an expert but thought it was really good.