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Congrats! I knew that EDM one was a winner!
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Great Job Brent! As Casey said, the EDM version s a winner all day longI REALLY REALLY liked the jazz one too.... I guess the screener has a point regarding the background vocals, but hey it is a JAZZ version right?? Wouldn't a bunch of stacked bg vocals sound a bit out of place? In any case, great work manBrentWhiten wrote: ↑Wed Mar 13, 2024 3:00 amFowarded:
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I think you could improve this song by:
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The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal support.
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Thank you Bradley!! Enjoyed your Rockin' version as well!BradleyHagen wrote: ↑Wed Mar 13, 2024 7:32 amGreat Job Brent! As Casey said, the EDM version s a winner all day longI REALLY REALLY liked the jazz one too.... I guess the screener has a point regarding the background vocals, but hey it is a JAZZ version right?? Wouldn't a bunch of stacked bg vocals sound a bit out of place? In any case, great work manBrentWhiten wrote: ↑Wed Mar 13, 2024 3:00 amFowarded:
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I think you could improve this song by:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal work. A thought would be a female backing presence for texture/variety. I'm hearing some angelic vocalizations to fill out the part.
I returned or forwarded this song because:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal support.
Thanks!
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