Feedback on Superhero Themed Orchestral Track - TAXI # S240420SU

[bmoBauhaus]

Hey, I would appreciate a fresh pair of ears on this. Comments on mix, composition or general thoughts are all appreciated. Thanks!

Here is my track
https://www.taxi.com/members/N5SOUeh_Qe ... ess-within

Here is the brief:
Lots of SUPERHERO-THEMED ORCHESTRAL INSTRUMENTALS and/or INSTRUMENTAL CUES are needed by a Great Music Licensing Company with lots of Film and TV placements.

This Company is looking for several Instrumentals (and/or Cues) in the general stylistic ballpark of the following references:

"Captain America March" by Alan Silvestri

"SpiderMan Main Title" by Danny Elfman

"The Marvels" by Laura Karpman

Please submit well-composed Orchestral Instrumentals and/or Instrumental Cues with an iconic, superhero sound and an exciting, memorable motif! Your submissions should have thematic motifs, well-written orchestration, memorable melodies, solid arrangements, and plenty of forward motion and interest throughout. Orchestral instrumentation that falls in the general ballpark of the references will work best. Your productions, and any virtual sounds or samples you use need to be of high quality and current-sounding. Don't be afraid to really layer up your instrumentation to create a blockbuster-worthy sound!

Your submissions should be roughly 90 seconds long for Cues, and about 2 to 4 minutes long for Instrumentals, give or take. Non-faded, buttoned/stinger endings will work best. Please do NOT copy the referenced artists or songs in any way, shape, or form. Use them only as a guide for tempo, texture, and tone. Do NOT submit any material with unauthorized samples of any other artists’ music, sounds, or any other form of media. Broadcast Quality is needed.