The New Beginnings (Children's Country Song)

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Re: The New Beginnings (Children's Country Song)

Post by funsongs » Fri Aug 09, 2024 12:33 pm

Casey H wrote:
Thu Aug 08, 2024 7:10 pm
Hey Alex
Peter (funsongs) already gave you a lot of feedback. It's not country and for children's music, the lyrics would have to be much simpler.

Additionally, I think it's too fast and should be slowed down. However, there is a much bigger problem. The melody sounds too much like "This Land Is Your Land", which appears to still be under copyright (not public domain).

Sorry for the bad news.

Best,
:-) Casey
WOW - "Good catch, Casey!" - I was focused on the lyrics, and didn't even think about the melody 'issue'.
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