Started a new song about the breeze

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Started a new song about the breeze

Post by feaker66 » Fri Sep 06, 2024 7:01 am

I wrote this early this morning and it sounds pretty decent so far. A pleasant departure from my "usual" stuff. first singing notes are low a g f#d peace to you

The breeze

A playful breeze a falling leaf.. soars high into the air D G A
It dances with the morning sun..a waltz so free and fair D G A

Through the golden meadows..and past the whispering trees G A D Bm
It whirls and twirls in spirals..carried by the breeze. G A…….D

As the twilight paints the sky in hues.. of pink and gorgeous blue D G A
It whispers secrets in breathless sounds..know to just a few D G A

It dances with the fireflies..beneath the evening star G A D Bm
A symphony of nature..heard from near and far G A…….D

Through moonlit valleys..over hills so high D
dreams are carried to the midnight sky G A
A chariot ..invisible… not to be denied D G A

In waning moments.. fading night..it sings a lullaby G A D Bm
whispers ..of the breeze.. a gentle sigh G A…….D
Thankfully, while growing old is compulsory, growing up remains optional!

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